zagerblag Posted:

Nope, still off. Current syllable counts:

First poem: 5-7-7 (also, “conformed” is used wrong)

Second poem: 5-7-5 (good, although “payers” should have an apostrophe at the end)

Third poem: 5-7-7

The first and third poems are still not haikus. As a math-loving nerd, I am frustrated by people’s failure to count.

Also, why do most of the entries seem to romanticize graffiti? Sure, there are some good street artists out there, but most graffiti is tags and vandalism on walls owned by people who don’t want graffiti there. Even if it could be considered art, lots of people don’t want art all over their walls.

I fixed it and added a new one