Hi people! Thank you everyone for all the reviews and not the flames! GRRR! Also, thanks to Cerventes, who this chapter is dedicated to. Thsi will be long, so RR! Also, I learned some tricks form a poetry conference I went to in scholl, so I spiced things up with words.

Chapter Five: The Dark surpriese

Time.

Three weeks had pbumed sinbce the Cholera Sonspiracy, and for Samus it was just the beginning. Dark lights had confused her soul, and it was a burden she could not comprehend. She sat in her bed grasping st the straws that had come loose, straws that poising the water of life. Lightness. Darkness.

Samus could not understand the fellings that gripped her apart over the three weeks. Forces were turning her away. But it was a force that could not be explained with the words. Grip was squeezing her like a lemon, the real kind. It was like a dream. Only this time, it was for real. Fake. Reality.

It sat acting like a chainsaw, and she could not go back to Ridley. Not now. Not like the past. She knew she still was loved, but there was something that was impossible to every go back. Temporary. Longjevity.

All of a sudden Samus screamed. She was losing sontrol over her concious, and there was a new force rising. It was like samus, only it was Dark Samus instead. She could barely fight to take over her actions, and she was becoming wierd. It was impossible to know what would happen next. Until it happened. This was her cholera, but soon, she knew it could not contain. Confession. Posession.

Obsession.

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Ridley knew there was a crisis, and he was meetinbg at his house. There also was Ted, Robbie, Tio Juan and Smiley the new kid. The tension was emergency, and it was about to implode.

“WHAT AM I GOING TO DO?!” detonated Ridley.

“Dude, calm down, its all cool” Smiley conformed.

“I’m not so sure that’s a great bumuage” Ted confusingly used vocabulary that not everyone knew.

“Ok, everyone, we need not to panic and we need to think of a solutoin” Tio Juan dictated.

Everyone was quiet and they all thought about the problem. It was quiet conundrum, and there was not a solutoint hat everyone could think of. Samus was not forgiving and especially she was acting strange, like she was becoming dark. Ridley did not like to think about this, and he didnt. Little did he know that this was much more to think than he though.

“If I was you, Id apoligize to the girl and say im sorry” Smiley permitted cool. People agreed with this, but Ridley was not so cleverly amused.

“But mwhen whould I do?” Ridley contended

“Tommorow.” everyone consencused, and it was agreed. But little did the meeting know, that there was a new darkness on the horision.

Darkness.

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It was a day at metroid high school, and things were bright and sunny. It was like the day that ridley asked out samus, but it was not that day ago. Ridley was ready to apoligize, but something was strange.There was a croud and rildey wanted to see what the commotion was.

It turned out there was a new kid, and he wore a black cloack with some chains and he had had blue hair that was natural that he didn’t die. When he walked, he was hot angsty and he had a bad bum. When someone asked him what his name was he said it was Cerventes.

“CERVENTES” Ridley engraved in stone. It was a name he never knew but he would never forget. YOu see, there was a problem that was right around the corner, and ridley could not bargain for the furture,

Samus was on a chair being angsty and Cerventes thought that she was her type. He sat down next to her, and began to woo her with his color.

“Hello.” Cerventes Began.

“Hi Returened Samus

“You look very beatiful and youre angsty” Cerventes Related. “I’ll See you around.”

Samus was amazed by this man. He thought he was beautiful, and they just met. But was angsty good? No. Yes no yes. No YES. Samus was battling herself and she almost missed the boat. She would think abotu this later, but not later as she decided.

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Inside her head, there was another battle. Samus against Dark Samus. Cholera against Samus. It was a battle that could not be broken, and no Saeregent could explain the situation. It was too late. Too late.

Too late.

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After school Samus was confromted by Ridley who was anticipated. The day had been very long, and he was ready to make up for the porblems he had created. But was Samus?

“Im sorry” Rildye apologized to little effect.

“Its too late for love” Samus deflated his baloon

Ridley was out of his mind. “but… what are ytou talking about?” he disillusioned

Ridley… I’m Cerventes’ girlfriend now.” Samus shocked the populace

time stood still but kept going for ridley. This was impossible to comprehend. WHAT THE HELL?

“But samus what about” but ridley was cut off because Cerventes came out of the door and dared with debonair.

“Goodbye” Samus ultimated, and Ridley was left alone in the cold. Too old. Too cold.

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH samus fought with dark samus for control. She could not believe she dumped her boyfriend, but it was too late. Or not.

“Dark Samus you suck” badmouthed Samus

“Hahaha, little girl. The cholera will soon devour you and I will control your body” Dark Samus snapped back. Samus snarled at her opponent and continued the battle that would determine.

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Cerventes and samus went to many places that were cool like “Hot Topic” and other places that ansty cool people chill. They ate some things, but the date was over pretty quick than it had started. Samus remembered her first date with ridley, but Dark Samus was in control and there was no stopping the lust.

“Lets go to my house” Cerventes proposed. Samus was wary of this request, but she was overcome with pbumion and was battled by the cholera her good judgement. There was little to do now. Just hope.

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At ridley’s house, ridley was depressed. He had screwed up his relationship, and now he was listening to depressing music. He was afraid that he might become emo, and it was likely. More likely than he could think.

He also was thinking about darker things, but it wasnt true. No, it was. No it wasnt. This was Ridleys battle, and he had things to overcome as well. If he could.

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Samus was naked and pbumionate, just like that long ago. But it was different. Because it wasnt ridley it was Cerventes. She was exploding in lust, but she kept feeling that it was wrong but dark samus was in control. There was little she could do. This day had been a mindblow. And it was only going to get worse from here she knew.

As Samus fell asleep in Cerventes, murky thoughts cloude her mind. Dark. Light. Ridley. Cerventes. Love. Lust

Redemption.

This chapter was dark but good. I have another on the way so dont worry and R&R if you please Thanks to everyone whos name i used and if u want ur name used just tell me. Hope u liked lol