Herrick Posted:

Okay so I was on fanfiction.net looking for stories to rip into (filter set to show romance stories obviously) and I found this absolute masterpiece set in the Halo universe.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4368062/1/Head_Over_Heels

Grunt/elite yaoi(gay) fluff, don’t say I didn’t warn you.

The quality of the spelling and grammar actually isn’t bad. The story, on the other hand, is of… debatable merit. At least it didn’t degenerate into bestiality. Or whatever you call those two doing it.

I am interested to see where you go with this. Above all, try to make yourself likable, in a mischievous kind of way. In other words, make sure the story really deserves it. ‘My Immortal’ is in no sense of the word ‘good’. However, if the story could possibly be mistaken for something approaching acceptable literary practises, be careful where you tread. Basically, try not to enrage too many people. You and I can see that this story should have stayed inside the authors’ head, but other people are far less discerning.

I’ll stop now, before I sound too much like a condescending arse. Anyway, good luck!