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Avatar: 44 2012-11-06 12:31:55 -0500

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humblefool Posted:

In the description for Fitness fabulous personry, it reads

“unfortunately named Fitness fabulous personry”

It should be “unfortunately-named Fitness fabulous personry,” since neither adjective can stand on its own.

If that’s not good enough, then the description for Trapped in the Closet reads

“An absolutely confounding, puzzling and confuzzling”

Do you guys hate the serial comma or something?

Like the New York Times or the Washington Post, we don’t use the serial comma here.

“Unfortunately named” doesn’t require a hyphen. “Unfortunately” is an adverb, not an adjective, and it modifies “named.” It could look a bit confusing, but it’s a common enough construction that it can stand as is.

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