BeBoBli Posted:

please review your draft for at least 3 major corrections I have spotted, also stop referencing memes. That’s a bit conceded. The internet will decide for you whether anything is meme material if it’s funny enough.

Thanks for the constructive criticism, but it would help if you could tell me where the errors are. I really have no desire to wade through this 7 page epic unless I know exactly where to look. Maybe I did go overboard with the meme referencing and everything, but I thought it was funny, so I included it.

For those of you who enjoyed this frankly awful piece of work, expect a new chapter soonish. Due to several TL;DR comments, the format will more episodic, with one chapter per post. Now even those who thought themselves safe can ‘enjoy’ it!