PhineasPoe Posted:

Subtle.

Just because it’s not an RP forum doesn’t mean I can’t have a negative opinion. Especially since we both have more or less the same problems with it. The disregard for the basic plot of the play turns me off when the point is to summarize. There’s wasted lines like: “I begged and pleaded with him, day after day \ but there just wasn’t anything that i could say.” Some parts don’t fit well, which also goes against the principle of the thing.

He asked is it win?

I said I didn’t think so.

I’ll agree that there was no subtlely intended. My concern is that someone is showing a part of their soul on a non rpg forum, so a degree of decorum and propriety should be respected. I mean, there really isn’t much constructive when you just say…

“Other than that, it’s pretty pointless. You glossed over so much due to the restraints of the format there’s really no sense in making it at all.”

Even though it’s layered underneath aggressive language, you DO state that by conforming to the meter of the parodied song, there are some plots points lost. However, don’t you think you could be a little nicer when you’re trying to be helpful? IF, that is, you ARE trying to be helpful and not just attacking someone and walking away like “JOB DONE!”