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I’m gonna nitpick again with the second courtroom instance, in this case an incosistency of an end-of-the-list comma.
I really don’t need to hear any more of this. DrrtyCop74, this court finds you absolutely, positively, totally and completely… Ms. Cop74…in addition to the charges of bribery, extortion, and quite probably having an awful singing voice, I’m going to hold you in contempt of court! ... and in the preceeding sTalk conversation... They know how to talk to a lady…even if she is packing a sawed-off shotgun! ... ”she is” doesn’t sound very ‘natural’ for this, and… I’m an officer of the law and I don’t take any ****. ... that’s a compound sentence (I think), and so needs a comma. I’ve these’ve already been posted, then, well, I’unno… “**** you” seems kinda rude… “deal with it”? OOH! OOH! A real one this tyme (yet prolly already reported): 53CurEO wants you enter the popular forum HAY DID U SEE THIZ??? and hack that bum up. Missing a “to”. OOH! OOH! And to accompany it: A forum for The Sovereign Knights of Mongolia, the guild belonging to much-maligned “fifth clbum” of Forumwarz. Missing a “the”. Q: If more than one of my(/our) many innane points are valid errors, can I(/we) request ‘Peen reappropriation to alts (since a good number were seen either through alt-exclusivity or alt re-viewing)? TJF588 edited this message on 11/14/2008 6:12PM |
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Posted On: 11/13/2008 2:23PM | View TJF588's Profile | # |