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TJF588

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“Flame Retarded”

Since it’s not fixed, I’ll bumume it hasn;t been adressed yet.

Krystl_Crackr1969 Posted:

Complete this for me and you shall richly compensated by the cosmos.

This is the second sentence of a post in the first sTalk convo with her. Totally should have “be” somewhere in there (where depends on how fancy/hippie you wanna sound). E-Peen no-o-ow... pls?

There’s also…

Doctor O Posted:

Once we were sure we had the right person, we tracked down your internet provider, and they were able to provide us with an email account.

“internet” needs to get proper-noun’d, and…

Doctor O Posted:

Speaking of stakes, there’s a trailer for this wacky Bollywood vampire movie that you have to check out…let me find the link here…

“let” perhaps needs it, too, but the lack of space bewteen the ellipse and “let” makes me think this is all part of the same line-o-thought (unless the non-space applies in all cases).

There was also the “[adjective] high-level agencies” thing, but that could fly without a comma.

TJF588 edited this message on 10/09/2008 10:35AM
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