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http://www.forumwarz.com/about In the “Phat Shout-Outz” section… — “Our awesome Emo kid artwork was done by Eden Bachelder.” (“kid” needs to be CAPS’d for consistency) — “If you’re nice to him on our forums he might draw something for you!” (run-on sentence; needs coma… comma) — “Sean Treadway wrote a cool little plugin we use for more dynamic file uploads using iframe remoting.” / “The paginating_find plug in handles our pagination.” (inconsistent “plugin”/”plug in”[/”plug-in”] use) — “We used and modified some amazing artwork that was licensed under The Creative Commons from BlueConsKen Saunders” (LOL WUT? What’s this Ken Saunders doing here, and without punctuation, no less!)
Some of those are somewhat triffling, but it seems like something correctable, and thus another centimetizer for me peen! Pwease? Don’t make me start nitpicking “It’s cool, check it out!”, despite its casual acceptability.
EDIT: Deleted a sentence of not-wrong (that I can tell, anyway) and added moar “b” (and ”/b”Log in to see images!.
MOAR EDIT: — “Email me when I receive tubmail from other players” from the Options page (minor; might need CAPSing; also, incongruent “Email”/”e-mail” within/without Options themselves) — “I haven’t been that worn-out since m’pacemaker ran outta batteries!” from CutiePie12xo e-mail/Tubmail (prolly just your style, but I’d’ve prolly spaced after the apostro; what’s your stance?) — “There’s a lovely Emo-Hacker by the name of Krystl_Crackr1969 who you ought to meet.” from S.E. Tubmail (should this be “whom”; S.E. seems like the grammatically-acute type). Mind, I got the Tubmail-related ones back in April, so I’m likely beating a dead horse (and not bothering to check for a carcbum). Also: who the hell orders it paper/rock/scissors? ROCK/PAPER/SCISSORS, MUTHA****A[H]! I was considering Krystal’s mention of “apple”, thinking that it wasn’t specified, but her use of “fruit” so soon after would make that sound redundant. Log in to see images! Oh, and how might I disable smileys (see above) and gets parentheses-acting asterisks to not bold something?
EDITx3: The dash matter is negligible (though my Tubmail from THE_**** spaces around it), but should the “caveat emptor” in the Ppwn Shoppe’s description be italicized?
EDIT v.IV: The INCIT page’s <head>/<title> area doesn’t ALL-CAPS “Incit”.
EDIT 5-bajillion: “You’re too dumb to know that copying and pasting exists. You typed in a URL manually, and made a typo” — Aside from the mid-bullet period despite no periods at the end of bullets, “made a typo” isn’t an independent clause, meaning that comma shouldn’t be there. <yeah, my bumetiveness will surely acrue me victoly!> TJF588 edited this message on 09/06/2008 7:54AM |
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| Posted On: 09/04/2008 2:57AM |
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