As a general rule if the author can string together a full sentence without murdering the English language they’re safe from me. Unless the story is really, really bad.

That grunt and elite thing was actually sorta funny in a parody sort of way. Plus like you said at least it didn’t get too descriptive (if only because nobody would know how the **** to picture it).

I’m probably more inclined to go with one of the 2 remaining HM stories I found earlier of preferably something far longer. Possibly tread into weaboo territory looking for victims if I can man up enough to stray into there.