mary misanthrope

your story about child abuse, it was creepy Log in to see images!

the pyro

your story about… um, something, i think it was funny!

gentlemen

you story about the demons and the death angels, it was impressive! vry good language and a cool battle in it, you showd that even a hero can be defeated! but i think it dident end good, it couldve had a stronger impact if the ending wasnt so sudden, but is still good!

big brother

your story about the chiken and the duck, it was rly weird! is like it has a hidden message or somthing!

dope-hardcore-0

your story about, um, philosphers i think, i dont understand :s but is looking interesting!

tangolho

your story about the brothers freeman, it was cool, but, he shot a policeman when he dident have a weapon? and i dont like that it ended with to be continued!

dope-hardcore-0 (2nd entry)

your story about space-time worms, this one was easyer to understand! but maybe this one could be a bit longer!

inaneanomaly

your story about the girl and the cat and the hooded figures, i think it was funny first, and then scary, and then it got all weird Log in to see images! would be better if you stayd in one style so it is consistant!

monkey in a suit with a gun (2nd entry)

your rhyming story about the mage of the rose, it was amazing! just the right length and also ended very good! a little odd rhythm here and there, but ovrall great work!

-rocky-sadly- (2nd entry)

your story about the hopping boy, it was sad Log in to see images!