Oh well here are a couple of corrections

Under the emo equipment description for Tribal Tattoo it’s currently

Even though the only tribe you belong to is that of the spoiled overly sheltered suburban brat, let’s face it: these things just look cool. (Also, you will finally earn the unrequited respect of your local minorities.)

it should be

Even though the only tribe you belong to is that of the spoiled, overly sheltered, suburban brat, let’s face it: these things just look cool. (Also, you will finally earn the unrequited respect of your local minorities.)

and under the description for Eyeball Piercing it’s currently

The ultimate emo accessory; nobody’s even attempted it before. Theoretically, it could kill you, but that’s not necessarily a downside to most emo kids.

However, this thing could cause more tears than the holocaust.

In this context Holocaust should always be capitalized.