I’m done with my story and have done my best to proof read it and spell check and add some grammar to it. but as none of that being what I’m good at it is still really poorly written and prob sucks. Ive had it done for awhile now just getting it tweaked has taken me days

I need to use a better word for enjoyment and don’t feel like looking up a synonyms for it so you guys can help me think of one that would be cool.

I’ll post it when I get home tonight but if any one wants to take the time and tell me how much I suck at telling story’s and proof read it for me that’s cool with me.