Your comments, my responses.

*People aren’t going to pay money for a game that FEELS like a browser game.

Yes they will.

*Make it playable offline

That is quite silly and removes the vital and “live” nature of this environment.

*Tighten up the interface a bit more: Provide shortcuts to the most used links, allow players to ‘take all’ deliveries

I wouldn’t mind an in screen “favorites”, but I simply bookmark my most used things. Also, with deliveries – I think you’re doing it wrong. You can certainly click the “take all” option at the top of the page when you click on deliveries.

*Introduce multiplayer and PvP

A multiplayer or klan based mini game would be awesome. Domination is a form of pvp.

*Get yourself out there more via advertisements to make yourself look like a more legitimate game

I’m fairly certain that has already begun, although I personally judge a game based on game quality rather than player quantity.

*Improve variation of attacks so it’s not, say, ‘fap-poetry-yo momma-insult-yo momma’ etc….

The new Episode will have expanded abilities. Also, you should consider: poetry, yo momma and then fap, yo momma again and so on.