iRAWR Posted:

A good poem, but you used too many repeating words. B-

You fail to understand: the repetition of words reflects the endless monotony of a life without love. Every day, we hear the same words; “hello,” “how are you,” “see you later,” that all have lost their meaning; the endless repetition of parents’ demented questions, the same patterns of nagging over and over. There is bitter irony on your giving this poem a grade at all; grades are meaningless, for so is life. Meaningless, empty.

Empty.

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