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Could use some revision, but it’s a cool idea.
While K-12 English clbumes are obnoxious and stupid, there is something to be said for “show, not tell”
Maybe it’s because I caught some of Fight Club on TV the other day but it was obvious to me what’s going on. Also, the switch from using “Dave” to the pronoun “he” may be too abrupt. |
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Posted On: 11/04/2008 12:01AM | View deMonSPaWN's Profile | # |