Enoby Posted:

OMG I totally didnt see this post! Your so nice thanx for asking Log in to see images!

SEE KINKO SUM POEPLE KNO’ HOW 2 RECOGNIZE GOOD WRITTING N ASK FOR ADVISE INSTEAD OF JUS FLAMMNG. Log in to see images!

OK Artificial Flavz, first thing is you haf 2 make your carachters. They should be rly special, like make sure the reader will like them alot. Make them rly HOT and sexxxy Log in to see images! You should give her exxxotic features like violet eyes or blue haair. Also you should describe what their waring all the time 2 help peeple pic’ture her. Use lots of de-tails so the reader’s will get a good picteur. If youre writin in the 1st person (thats like when your writing like with “I” n stuff) you can describe wut your waring by having your main carachter look in the mirror.

Um, also she should have a beauty-full name. I am very proud of the names Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way (Log in to see images!. That makes them seem more exxxotic n so on.

But your carachters shouldnt be parfeckt. They should have like a mole or a cowlick or a gap in there teef som’fing like that. This makes them mor realistick. Log in to see images!

Also if your carachters do stuff you should describe how they do it. Use wurdz that end in *ly* like Goffick’ly, Darkly, and Sadly. Or you can use a phrase like “In a goffick way” or “In a sad way”. Also when you hav dialog you shouldn’t just say like “he said” and “I said.” You can show how they said it by saying “He Snapped” and “I Shouted Suddenly”. That makes your storey exxxciting Log in to see images!.

Also when peeple talk they should be realist’ick like say “OMG” and “STFU!” ‘cuz IDK its just normel.

I cant wait 2 red som of yore storeys! Log in to see images!

how many times do I have to say this? KILL YOURSELF.

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