Celerysteve Posted:

Good job editing apprentice team. Wouldn’t want to alienate your audience by attempting anything above the artistic merit of Larry the Cable Guy. “Fire Fire!” made a bunch better opening than an homage to Robert Frost. You stay clbumy, San Diego.

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And that’s why you were — wait for it — “fired.” Heh, heh.

It should be pretty obvious that the character was yelling “fire” to cause panic in the reader, not because he was channeling Cornholio.

But yes, point taken. You often have to play to your audience. If you want to read poetry, there are plenty of other sites for that.

Anyway, I think I have your original script somewhere, if you’ve resolved to share it with the clbum.