woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)

Despite the great lengths the author goes to describe her characters, all I see when I think of them is a target labeled: ‘shoot here, and for the love of all that is good and holy, DO NOT MISS’.

wow, I laughed my bum off when I saw this little paragraph, I laughed at how amazingly pathetic this fanfiction is.

Edit: oh my ****ing god… I read through most of the posts I missed of that horrible fanfic… I have never have I seen a real Re-Re on the internet, and now I have… thank you for going though the trouble of reviewing that piece of **** fanfic and may your brain cell damage be minimal on future chapters

(I laughed my bum off at your harvest moon high review, I like harvest moon, and that fic completely deserved it)

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while we’re at it:

Sadly this piece of **** is real; straight from the source.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2828044/1/

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Log in to see images! zenon edited this message on 07/01/2008 1:37PM