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|[CLOSED] Official Forumwarz contest: Create your own emo-ku!|
playground swing, chain creaks dead leaves dance beneath my feet i scare the toddlers ~ rotting pumpkin stench white mold rending tender flesh my mom's so ghetto ~ scent of pine needles tinsel, carols, silver chimes puking up cookies
Kerridwen_Kali edited this message on 06/12/2008 2:14PM
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 2:09PM||View Kerridwen_Kali's Profile | #|
Here are my 3 submissions, I never made a haiko, or read one, so… dont be to harsh..
Once I was sad
I saw that life was too bad
God please kill me
Life is so boring
Death seems so sweat
I need a razor
I need some space
Life sucks bad
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 2:18PM||View Tangolho's Profile | #|
Why don’t you like me?
The blood coming from my wrists
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 2:24PM||View Evil Karp's Profile | #|
Like an albatross
It hangs from my neck with shame
Hate this stupid tie
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 3:00PM||View Orb's Profile | #|
A band shirt and some piercings
and crotch-clenching pants
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 3:08PM||View DeadMcMahon's Profile | #|
my tears, black as night
as the night I got grounded
for leaving the lights on
shut in my locker
i find solace in the dark
all my stuff is here
it is not “make-up”
it’s a window to my soul
look you made me cryraging apathy edited this message on 06/13/2008 2:50PM
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:37PM||View raging apathy's Profile | #|
Try to make them in haiku format =]
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:42PM||View guenwhyever's Profile | #|
There’s a lot of that in this thread.
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:43PM||View MC Banhammer's Profile | #|
There sure is, even with the nice little explanation and a link in the first post. =\
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:58PM||View guenwhyever's Profile | #|
abandoned, bereft, ignored,
enire edited this message on 06/12/2008 7:16PM
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 7:15PM||View enire's Profile | #|
Oh, kindred spirits!
Thou art siblings in anguish!
I love Hot Topic!
Torturing my fragile soul
Buy me that car, Dad!
Prove your love, my sweet
Show your devotion to me
Friend me on MySpace
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 7:16PM||View LOLBags's Profile | #|
My parents love me.
They give support and kindness.
This is SO not fair.
My sorrow is complete.
The mascara that I wear
is out of business.
OH! How sweet the pain.
The razor cuts my pale skin.
Drip! Drip! Goes the blood.
——-Conconhead edited this message on 06/12/2008 7:23PM
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 7:22PM||View Conconhead's Profile | #|
some of these are just expressions of rage at your disdain for japanese poetry forms…or just because i hate you
my “serious” submissions are given here with messed up formatting from the “list” tag
real haiku is
supposed to be about the
seasons you ****ers
my way of life is not a
the flavors of popsicles
only gross ones left
me? and do i hear what you
hear? ****, there’s no more—
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 8:01PM||View ScreamOfConsciou...'s Profile | #|
This is what we call funny =]
Perfect emo mockery…
Deserving of a win ;]
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 8:17PM||View guenwhyever's Profile | #|
I love the ones Big Brother made. So emo.
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 10:21PM||View Esperanza's Profile | #|
|Posted On: 06/12/2008 11:02PM||View -Ghost-'s Profile | #|
If ever I have
A lover, I’d dump her bum
Then I’d mourn my loss
My dozens of friends
Ruin my cool self-image
with their steadfast love
I wish that my lawn
Were more like my emo self
So it would cut me
|Posted On: 06/13/2008 2:28AM||View Murderousness's Profile | #|
This life is long dead
Everyday is but a dread
I wish I was dead
Sitting Alone Sad
A Dark room filled with sorrows
This pain is from you
Yeah thats my emo-ku’sBear edited this message on 06/13/2008 3:08AM
|Posted On: 06/13/2008 3:08AM||View Bear's Profile | #|
I ware grl e pant
I ware grl e mayk up 2
wyn 4 no ree sun
|Posted On: 06/13/2008 3:32AM||View Grog The Barbari...'s Profile | #|
Family is killing me
They don’t understand
|Posted On: 06/13/2008 4:15AM||View Call Me Diego's Profile | #|