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Official Forumwarz contest: Create your own emo-ku!
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playground swing, chain creaks dead leaves dance beneath my feet i scare the toddlers ~ rotting pumpkin stench white mold rending tender flesh my mom's so ghetto ~ scent of pine needles tinsel, carols, silver chimes puking up cookies Kerridwen_Kali edited this message on 06/12/2008 2:14PM |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 2:09PM |
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Here are my 3 submissions, I never made a haiko, or read one, so… dont be to harsh..
1st
Once I was sad I saw that life was too bad God please kill me
2nd Life is so boring Death seems so sweat I need a razor
3rd Parents stop I need some space Life sucks bad |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 2:18PM |
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Why don’t you like me? The blood coming from my wrists Tokio Hotel |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 2:24PM |
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Like an albatross It hangs from my neck with shame Hate this stupid tie |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 3:00PM |
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Last haiku
Fashion Pinnacle
A band shirt and some piercings
and crotch-clenching pants |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 3:08PM |
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my tears, black as night as the night I got grounded for leaving the lights on . . shut in my locker i find solace in the dark all my stuff is here . . it is not “make-up” it’s a window to my soul look you made me cry raging apathy edited this message on 06/13/2008 2:50PM |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:37PM |
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Tangolho Posted:
Try to make them in haiku format =] |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:42PM |
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guenwhyever Posted:
There’s a lot of that in this thread. |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:43PM |
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There sure is, even with the nice little explanation and a link in the first post. =\ |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 6:58PM |
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Forgotten, alone, abandoned, bereft, ignored, rejected, despised. enire edited this message on 06/12/2008 7:16PM |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 7:15PM |
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Oh, kindred spirits! Thou art siblings in anguish! I love Hot Topic!
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Injustice abounds Torturing my fragile soul Buy me that car, Dad!
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Prove your love, my sweet Show your devotion to me Friend me on MySpace |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 7:16PM |
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My parents love me. They give support and kindness. This is SO not fair. ———— My sorrow is complete. The mascara that I wear is out of business. ————— OH! How sweet the pain. The razor cuts my pale skin. Drip! Drip! Goes the blood. ——- Conconhead edited this message on 06/12/2008 7:23PM |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 7:22PM |
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some of these are just expressions of rage at your disdain for japanese poetry forms…or just because i hate you
my “serious” submissions are given here with messed up formatting from the “list” tag
real haiku is supposed to be about the seasons you ****ers
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my way of life is not a breakfast cereal
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the flavors of popsicles only gross ones left
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me? and do i hear what you hear? ****, there’s no more— |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 8:01PM |
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LOLBags Posted:
This is what we call funny =] Perfect emo mockery… Right format…
Deserving of a win ;] |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 8:17PM |
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I love the ones Big Brother made. So emo. |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 10:21PM |
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私のお父さんは誰も私である陽気な 同性愛者どこにか子供が 私切ったと同時に私を強姦した |
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| Posted On: 06/12/2008 11:02PM |
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If ever I have
A lover, I’d dump her bum
Then I’d mourn my loss
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My dozens of friends
Ruin my cool self-image
with their steadfast love
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I wish that my lawn
Were more like my emo self
So it would cut me |
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| Posted On: 06/13/2008 2:28AM |
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This life is long dead Everyday is but a dread I wish I was dead
————————————- Sitting Alone Sad A Dark room filled with sorrows This pain is from you
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Yeah thats my emo-ku’s Bear edited this message on 06/13/2008 3:08AM |
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| Posted On: 06/13/2008 3:08AM |
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I ware grl e pant I ware grl e mayk up 2 wyn 4 no ree sun |
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| Posted On: 06/13/2008 3:32AM |
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Darkness envelopes Family is killing me They don’t understand |
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| Posted On: 06/13/2008 4:15AM |
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