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People Call Me A "LOL"ipop!
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Here’s a poem by pathetic me! :C Log in to see images!
People call me a “LOL”ipop, They LOL when they see me, Mom and dad just calls me a fail, Old pervs sends me their email, My cat pees at my shoes.
The End
... of my life! After you died, In darkness I fell, And you always lied, That it would end up well, Last week you were great, My partner and mate, Our souls was connected, By you I was affected, Why did you have to go, I feel very low. Log in to see images! |
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| Posted On: 08/10/2011 10:21AM |
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3/10 your iambic pentameter was off in that last stanza
yes there was only one stanza what of it? |
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| Posted On: 08/10/2011 10:22AM |
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my english isn’t perfect since im a little whiny ****, whats “stanza”? After you died, In darkness I fell, And you always lied, That it would end up well, Last week you were great, My partner and mate, Our souls was connected, By you I was affected, Why did you have to go, I feel very low. Log in to see images! |
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| Posted On: 08/10/2011 10:25AM |
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(btw i make much better poems irl, this one was just 4 fun, i made it bad with purpose x3) After you died, In darkness I fell, And you always lied, That it would end up well, Last week you were great, My partner and mate, Our souls was connected, By you I was affected, Why did you have to go, I feel very low. Log in to see images! |
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| Posted On: 08/10/2011 10:25AM |
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EmoGirlsDiary Posted:
Still looks like **** to me. |
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| Posted On: 08/10/2011 6:14PM |
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Log in to see images! Log in to see images! |
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| Posted On: 08/10/2011 8:10PM |
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EmoGirlsDiary Posted:
Log in to see images! Log in to see images!
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| Posted On: 08/11/2011 12:51PM |
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Log in to see images! Log in to see images! This is the part where Single Tingle turns into Double Trouble and ends up in If you don’t fall for the joke, you get to be in on it. |
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| Posted On: 08/11/2011 2:12PM |
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| Posted On: 08/11/2011 2:25PM |
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