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|IoA Contest: Storys of Avalon (120 Bp on prizes)|
Where am I?
Why is everything black?
Did I die?
But if I’m dead, how can I be thinking that?
Am I in…Heaven?
Who…who said that?
I am the Watchmaster of the Isle of Avalon.
Isle of Avalon? What on earth is that?
Nothing on earth. Your corporeal form is, as you would say dead.
I’m dead? Then why am I here? Shouldn’t I be getting judged, or something?
You have already been judged. That is why you are here.
I…I don’t understand
It is not surprising. Death has a peculiar effect on mortal minds. You are on the Isle of Avalon, the midpoint between the two places you would refer to as ‘Heaven’ and ‘Hell’
So…I’m in Limbo?
That is one way of putting it. You will remain here until an important matter is decided.
An important matter?
Very important. No less than the fate of your soul.
My…my soul? But I thought you said I had already been judged?
Yes. Your were judged according to the wisdom of the Almighty. Your soul was weighed and examined. Your every sin was catalogued, every good thought and deed noted.
Both columns were added up, taking into account every single facet of your life. And both sided balanced. Perfectly.
It is a very rare occurrence, but your good and bad balanced out. Therefore, both Heaven and Hell are open to you.
Wait, I get the choice? There must be a catch.
There is a task you must perform to enter the Pearly Gates.
Okay, I guess I can give it a try.
You must do more than try. What I am about to give you will change the course of humanity. It is the secret that will unite all people in love of the Lord.
Wait, you want me to be some sort of Jesus or Muhammad?
They were but men, just like you. Their columns balanced, and they were offered the same chance you have now.
I’ll do it.
Very well mortal. You will be restored to an earthly body. However, you only have one chance. Fail, and you will be cast into the fires of the deep, to languish in pain for all eternity.
This is the message you must carry:
I…I…I can’t believe it’s so simple…how did we not notice?
Then go. Go towards the light and save your people!
Gotta head towards the light. The light will save my people.
I will carry His message to the world!
No more suffering! No more death!
I will finally make something of my life!
Just head towards the li…
Faye kept on pedalling, barely registering the collision. “It was just a worm” she thought, “not like it was going to change the world or anything.” As her fast receding bicycle disappeared into the sunset, a barely audible scream of absolute soul-crushing pain and anguish could be heard, blowing on the breeze…Sarcasm Inc edited this message on 04/24/2010 7:30AM
|Posted On: 04/24/2010 5:41AM||View Sarcasm Inc's Profile | #|
Welcome to the Isle of Avalon
For so many years, we have kept to ourselves; studying the ancient texts, learning the healing arts, understanding the night sky. We are now open to all those who want to share experiences.
Call on the mystics of the Isle of Avalon™ for inspiration and guidance…
|Posted On: 04/24/2010 7:17AM||View Patently Chill P...'s Profile | #|
once upons a time of beings there was of a island where peoples lived Log in to see images!
one days there was of being a cat that was of being hurt Log in to see images!
theys is of givins the cat some love ands the cat was of feelings betters Log in to see images!
everyones in avalalalalon was happiness and of dancing Log in to see images!
the end of being Log in to see images!
|Posted On: 04/24/2010 9:06AM||View smuglinuxusinggu...'s Profile | #|
Sarcasm Inc Posted:
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I liked that one a lot!
|Posted On: 04/24/2010 11:45AM||View g7parsh's Profile | #|
One more day left! No more entries?
|Posted On: 04/29/2010 12:01AM||View g7parsh's Profile | #|
I hopes I win.
|Posted On: 04/29/2010 12:03AM||View xxEmoxKidxx's Profile | #|
Ok Well, we selected the best storys:
First Place: Sarcasm Inc 50 Log in to see images!
Second Place: UnlimitedTyyppi 35 Log in to see images!
Third Place: smuglinuxusingguy 20 Log in to see images!
Blade97 fav > http://www.forumwarz.com/discussions/view_post/811986
G7parsh fav > http://www.forumwarz.com/discussions/view_post/812489
5 Log in to see images! each.
Btw all was worth to read…. sending the bp- Log in to see images!
|Posted On: 04/29/2010 3:28PM||View Fae the Doll's Profile | #|
Wow. For a story I thought up just before I went to sleep, it did pretty well. Cheers!
|Posted On: 04/29/2010 11:55PM||View Sarcasm Inc's Profile | #|
Fudge, I forgot to submit mine.
|Posted On: 04/30/2010 2:46AM||View mterek's Profile | #|
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I’m sad now… Nobody likes my stories…. Log in to see images!
|Posted On: 04/30/2010 3:16AM||View xxEmoxKidxx's Profile | #|
|Posted On: 04/30/2010 3:35AM||View Sarcasm Inc's Profile | #|