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xxEmoxKidxx's Poetry Thread. | |||||||
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You Wrote Me a Love Letter.
Promising that every word was true.
But I’m confused by the signature,
So remind me who are you?
And as I glance at the letter
Full of cliches it reminds me of better days
Days of Rutherford B. Hayes.
Days of the Ferris Wheel
We could ride up to the top
and Time would seem to stop.
And before the wheel starts turning,
and I mean no disrespect.
But I never caught your name and that’s because you are not real.
But I knew this before I made my spiel,
Because you were an e-mail.
I should have known better than this.
But as the saying goes Ignorance is Bliss. Log in to see images!
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 2:44AM | View xxEmoxKidxx's Profile | # | ||||||
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That is a beautiful poem. You should keep at it! |
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 8:11AM | View Eggsei's Profile | # | ||||||
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 9:32AM | View megazeroexe's Profile | # | ||||||
quality rping right here Log in to see images! Log in to see images!
LOL DRAGINZ visit those |
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 10:13AM | View Parlok's Profile | # | ||||||
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 12:14PM | View donbee's Profile | # | ||||||
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xxEmoxKidxx Posted:
I can’t go through this again.
Never again.
I'M A SIG-DISABLING COCKMONGLER
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 1:16PM | View King Krimson's Profile | # | ||||||
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We look so white
in this light
like two angels disguised
as sinners
who don’t believe in sin
let me in so I can
feel you again
be you again
because I miss you
and then
everything I write is ****
and I know it
how can I be a
proper poet
when my head is filled with
nonsense
like happiness and incense
and yes, I love you
and yes, I miss you
but I also miss you as an
unobtainable
as a person far away
and I guess you still are that
so I miss what I have?
I don’t pretend to make sense
that would be pretense
like pre verb tense?
just know I don’t regret the
past tense
I don’t regret one second
even though I’m coughing every second
in the present tense
were past tense
now restless.
but I didn’t get you sick
pity, misery loves company
maybe you got me sick
Love sick?
I’m not used to this!
thinking in terms of
cliches
and
better days
and how can this be wrong
when it feels so right?
you look so white
in this light
like an angel
disguised as sinner
but I don’t believe in sin!
breathe me in
so I can write again. Log in to see images!
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 3:42PM | View xxEmoxKidxx's Profile | # | ||||||
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doggerel Log in to see images! This is the part where Single Tingle turns into Double Trouble and ends up in If you don’t fall for the joke, you get to be in on it. |
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 3:53PM | View Adapt's Profile | # | ||||||
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Adapt Posted:
ad Hominem Log in to see images! Log in to see images!
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 6:44PM | View xxEmoxKidxx's Profile | # | ||||||
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xxEmoxKidxx Posted: Log in to see images! This is the part where Single Tingle turns into Double Trouble and ends up in If you don’t fall for the joke, you get to be in on it. |
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 6:52PM | View Adapt's Profile | # | ||||||
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tl;dr Log in to see images! |
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 6:59PM | View elenaratelimit's Profile | # | ||||||
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Adapt Posted:
A derogatory term meaning A verse of little importance, the subject is trite, and the rhythm is monotonous and heavy handed. Log in to see images!
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 7:09PM | View xxEmoxKidxx's Profile | # | ||||||
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i meant the word ad hominem since you seem to realize i was calling your poem ****, i don’t see how i was avoiding the subject of what i thought about your poem by insulting you rather than it. e: also that’s not quite what doggerel means anyway so you are wrong on two counts Adapt edited this message on 03/25/2010 7:15PMLog in to see images! This is the part where Single Tingle turns into Double Trouble and ends up in If you don’t fall for the joke, you get to be in on it. |
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Posted On: 03/25/2010 7:14PM | View Adapt's Profile | # | ||||||
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you are stupid and therefore wrong Log in to see images! |
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