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Compose A Senryu for 45bp
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For those of you who don’t know a senryu is a three line Japanese poem structurally the same as a haiku, but unrhymed and on the subject of human nature rather than just nature. It is usually satirical or ironic. I suggest you google for examples.
In one week I will award the senryu that strikes me the most with 45bp. You are permitted one entry per account. Do not post anything other than senryu in this thread. Tubmail with any questions or comments. You can go either the satiric and ironic route or the serious route, I favor neither.
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 9:03PM |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 9:03PM |
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Fie can I confirm that the structure should be exactly as follows?
5 syllables.
7 syllables.
5 syllables. |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 9:07PM |
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If so this is my entry.
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“Life is ****.” He said.
“And then one day you just die”
Grandpa is damn smart.
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 9:11PM |
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Literally, the man said that to me. I was quite surprised at his cynicism. |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 9:12PM |
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——— This contest is dumb I’m still spending time on it **** you with a rake
Edit: One entry each? I should read things before I reply to them. Last one it is. man-man edited this message on 12/08/2009 9:23PM |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 9:21PM |
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Open the shutters.
It’s raining outside again.
Back to bed. Who cares. |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 9:22PM |
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I am so horny Send me a pic of duca Topless (great contest!) |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 10:12PM |
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Everything on earth Is ****ty, like ForumWarz Yet you play them both |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 10:28PM |
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I make eye contact |
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| Posted On: 12/08/2009 10:50PM |
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USA rocks but why does our own dollar bill say in god we trust? |
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| Posted On: 12/09/2009 10:54AM |
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Deafening rumbling Mountain has fallen apart. I shot rikishi. Desperate night Down in motel with granddad Wish it was geisha :( I vomit a lot Sakuras bloom in my wake Good fertilizer. My English is bad After a jug of sake Gonna get another |
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| Posted On: 12/09/2009 11:25AM |
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Masturbate daily. I do so without regret. Then I eat tacos. |
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| Posted On: 12/10/2009 8:57AM |
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Posting Because I’m bored Log in to see images! |
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| Posted On: 12/10/2009 9:02AM |
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four years of work
the degree brings pride
welcome to starbucks |
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| Posted On: 12/10/2009 3:26PM |
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“You are great! Now please,” Her praise makes life worth living! “flip this tape over.” |
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| Posted On: 12/11/2009 8:30PM |
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Do I know that guy? OH GOD, HERE HE COMES AVOID EYE CONTACT |
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| Posted On: 12/11/2009 8:46PM |
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The door won’t open I pull with all my might and ignore the ‘push’ sign Afterthotz edited this message on 12/12/2009 12:34AM |
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| Posted On: 12/11/2009 9:41PM |
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**** THE MODS YOU AIN’T GONNA BAN ME FOR POSTING IN CAPS |
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| Posted On: 12/11/2009 10:13PM |
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I logged on, yes. I played Forumwarz, yes. My life sux, **** you. |
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| Posted On: 12/12/2009 12:25AM |
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