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Poetry Heres a poem I wrote...

Velvetcrush

Avatar: 146177 Tue Mar 17 14:32:49 -0400 2009

[Throne of Blood]

Level 30 Emo Kid

“Zorba the Bleak”

I cant ****in belive im posting this. Well here we go…

With the words said,

the symptoms of hurt begin:

The limbs falter,

the eyes drown,

confusion pulls the mind,

the lips go down.

pain tears through the system

the heart beats a wild chase.

blood flows faster

breathe comes at a slower rate

as these things end,

Hate begins to set in:

flexing the fingers,

sniffing the air,

coughing now and then,

shaking back the hair,

lunging forward,

red flashes across the vision,

and hands turn crimson,

all in the same instant

Tell me what you guys think!


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DerKaiserRei-
ch

Avatar: 118110 Sun May 31 19:28:37 -0400 2009

[Temple of the Anth-
ropomorphic Majesty
]

Level 31 Troll

One of the few user who literally understands me -Aldo

Velvetcrush Posted:

I cant ****in belive im posting this. Well here we go…

With the words said,

the symptoms of hurt begin:

The limbs falter,

the eyes drown,

confusion pulls the mind,

the lips go down.

pain tears through the system

the heart beats a wild chase.

blood flows faster

breathe comes at a slower rate

as these things end,

Hate begins to set in:

flexing the fingers,

sniffing the air,

coughing now and then,

shaking back the hair,

lunging forward,

red flashes across the vision,

and hands turn crimson,

all in the same instant

Tell me what you guys think!

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ChilePepino

Avatar: 101005 2010-01-24 16:17:40 -0500
5

[Full of SbumSS]

Level 35 Permanoob

Well, spf357 really rocks.

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Somebody

Avatar: 51757 2010-03-05 21:47:01 -0500
12

[Harem and Sushi Bar]

Level 69 Troll

Klanhop Extraordinaire

Meh


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traindestroy

Avatar: 167226 Mon Jun 15 00:16:38 -0400 2009

[Backdoor Amigos]

Level 10 Emo Kid

“Gloomy Gus”

The metaphoric aspects of the poem are pretty easy to discern from the connotation of your word choice but I’m a little unclear on what is happening literally in the poem. Could you clear that up for me?

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Vageena Davis

Avatar: 151797 2010-01-24 16:34:00 -0500
29

[pizza party]

Level 69 Camwhore

I am easily offended. I also suck fine upstanding member of society male reproductive organs.

That was lyfe changing


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Celerysteve

Avatar: 61989 2011-12-28 11:21:37 -0500
24

[Temple of the Anth-
ropomorphic Majesty
]

Level 35 Troll

Right from the moment when I saw Saw, I laughed.

some ‘emo kids’ take ‘emo roleplay’ srs Log in to see images!


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Velvetcrush

Avatar: 146177 Tue Mar 17 14:32:49 -0400 2009

[Throne of Blood]

Level 30 Emo Kid

“Zorba the Bleak”

Incarnadine Posted:

The metaphoric aspects of the poem are pretty easy to discern from the connotation of your word choice but I’m a little unclear on what is happening literally in the poem. Could you clear that up for me?

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The poem is actually called I’m Sorry. Its about cheating. When my ex cheated on me the first thing I felt was sadness. Then after that wore off, was anger. Thats the part of “red flashes across the vision”


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Recommencer

Avatar: 135255 Tue Mar 24 17:02:05 -0400 2009

[Throne of Blood]

Level 35 Emo Kid

“Cutty Cutterson”

Celerysteve Posted:

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I pine for you Steviepoo. I want to be your Caboose.


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Velvetcrush

Avatar: 146177 Tue Mar 17 14:32:49 -0400 2009

[Throne of Blood]

Level 30 Emo Kid

“Zorba the Bleak”

Its not rp for me its actually me IRL.


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I dont suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it!

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