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Rage_****

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[Grey Goose Mafiosi]

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Rage_Shit edited this message on 02/07/2009 9:51AM

Fingerz

Avatar: 22863 2010-11-15 01:15:51 -0500
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Level 35 Emo Kid

A neverhasbeen

Breaking the speed limit of the road?

You’d have been better off saying, simply, “breaking the speed limit”.

Also I’m not sure about the “there are many candidates outside”. That sentence doesn’t make much sense on its own; hopefully it was just taken out of context?

Rage_****

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[Grey Goose Mafiosi]

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Fingerz Posted:

Breaking the speed limit of the road?

You’d have been better off saying, simply, “breaking the speed limit”.

Also I’m not sure about the “there are many candidates outside”. That sentence doesn’t make much sense on its own; hopefully it was just taken out of context?

All of them were aout of context. A simple “Fill in the blanks” excerxise.

Also, Good point on the speed limit thing. Thanks.

MasterHaxxor

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Level 25 Hacker

“Mafiaboy”

“She said that she doesn’t love me.”

“Let’s not talk about this, it makes me upset.” and

“They told me I was being too mean to her.”

Are you sure you aren’t actually an emo kid that just got dumped?

Anyway, I think you should have made each one of these a stand alone statement like your It’s getting very cold outside, since the winter season started” statement instead of things that sound strange out of context, but not bad overall.

MasterHaxxor edited this message on 02/07/2009 10:27AM

Rage_****

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[Grey Goose Mafiosi]

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MasterHaxxor Posted:

”She said that she doesn’t love me.”

“Let’s not talk about this, it makes me upset.” and

“They told me I was being too mean to her.”

Are you sure you aren’t actually an emo kid that just got dumped?

ding ding ding, we have a winner!

Not really. But I did write those ones on purpose. I was thinking that each person would read them all, so someone could get the clue.

Fingerz

Avatar: 22863 2010-11-15 01:15:51 -0500
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Level 35 Emo Kid

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Next time write all your sentences as if you were having fantasies about raping and killing your mother and see how your teacher reacts! Log in to see images!

Rage_****

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[Grey Goose Mafiosi]

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Fingerz Posted:

Next time write all your sentences as if you were having fantasies about raping and killing your mother and see how your teacher reacts! Log in to see images!

Good idea. I’m gonna adapt and put the teacher in them though. >=)

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