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Poetry my poetry

Crawling Cha-
os

Avatar: Emo Girl

Level 10 Emo Kid

“Gloomy Gus”

hi guys im new here

im a poet… sometday i might get published… ‘cause my poems are like… meaningful… like… expressions of my soul.

[i]My spirit lies bleakly chained

To the obsidian slab of broken memories

At the center of the thorn-choked maze

Which is the shadowed lands of my heart

Oh the torment! as the ravens its

Upon this bound soul

Plucking at my flesh

As I bleed into the blackness

It reminds me of the pain that is this life

O! Woe and shadows! O!

When will these sorrows end?

when will I be set free?

I cannot escape

I cannot escape

The sorrows of this life[/i]

k id write more but my parents like kicked me off the computer b4 so thats all i have. sry.

*e* ok wtf why arent the bbcode tags working

the meaning is lost if the poem isnt in italics wtf! god who the **** coded this board.

Crawling Chaos edited this message on 12/17/2007 1:03AM

a bleak and raveged raven

perches upon my shattered soul

the peices will not unite

i am broken forevermore

Paraone

Avatar: Paraone's Avatar
7

[egg]

Level 10 Troll

i am a heron. i ahev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak.

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Orange Julius, you are the only one who gives me comfort in the midst of these conformist plebians, as I await the return of my mother from her JC Penny outing. Oh, the woe of being enlightened. If only Tool or Korn were playing on the mall broadcast I could achieve a state of meditation and escape this conservative Hell. But alas, Tori Amos only enhances the torture of being a wolf in a herd of sheeple. Satan, dark lord, I beg you to usher my mother with most haste, I am eager to return to my room and close the door. Then I can return to spilling my dark essence into my vampire poetry.

*sips smoothie*


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Crawling Cha-
os

Avatar: Emo Girl

Level 10 Emo Kid

“Gloomy Gus”

... wtf. r u making fun of me what… i cant tell ‘cause you almost like, made good poetr but i think ur makin fun of me arent u

fabulous person ill totally tell azazoth to pwn you tonight when i offer prayers to him

... if my parents didn’t ruin my ****ing shrine again


a bleak and raveged raven

perches upon my shattered soul

the peices will not unite

i am broken forevermore

Casey

Avatar: Jimmy the Re-Re

[Team AWESOME]

Level 8 Re-Re

$pecial |n mai own littel way #/\/?

MY LOVE FOR YOU IS IN MY ****

BERSERKER BERSERKER

WOULD YOU LIKE TO SUCK MY male reproductive organ

BERZERKER BERSERKER

Paraone

Avatar: Paraone's Avatar
7

[egg]

Level 10 Troll

i am a heron. i ahev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak.

here’s a poem i wrote

Little Lola’s Lion licked her lollipop

She screamed and cried, and pulled and pried

But could not make him stop

Little Lola’s Lion just sat there like a rock

Lick, lick, licking

On Lola’s lollipop

Little Lola stopped trying

And called out to Bird

She went to Bird still crying

And asked to have a word

“Bird”, she said while snuffling

“Lions got my lollipop!”

“Well,” Bird said while shuffling

“I can’t make him stop!”

“I am just a Bird” he said

“And he’s a lion after all

He’s got claws on his paws

A powerful maw

And teeth within his head!”

So Little Lola’s Lion licked her lollipop

She screamed and cried, and pulled and pried

But could not make him stop

Little Lola’s Lion just sat there like a rock

Lick, lick, licking

On Lola’s lollipop

Little Lola stopped trying

And called out to Snake

She went to Snake still crying

And he began to quake

“Snake” she said while blithering

“Lions got my lollipop!”

“Well,” said Snake while slithering

“I can’t make him stop!”

“I am just a snake” he begged

“And he’s a lion after all

He’s got teeth like a saw

Lining his jaw

And four dangerous legs!”

So Little Lola’s Lion licked her lollipop

She screamed and cried, and pulled and pried

But could not make him stop

Little Lola’s Lion just sat there like a rock

Lick, lick, licking

On Lola’s lollipop

Lola yelled and hopped

As Lion sat there as a rock

“I want a lick, I want a lick!”

At last Lion stopped

Then Lion said to her

“What is it that you need?”

Lola’s shout raised his fur

“SHAMEFUL IS YOUR GREED”

“I WANT A LICK, I WANT A LICK!”

“I WANT A LICK, JUST ONE!”

“I’m sorry Little Lola but…

The lollipop is done.”

ITS FOR KIDS


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Lokissadness

Avatar: Sneakers

Level 5 Emo Kid

“Emotionally Stable”

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Life is pain

pain is life

pain is pain

life is life

only trust your dog . . .

This is something I poured my soul into, you think it sux right? Whatever . . .


Whatever . . .

Crawling Cha-
os

Avatar: Emo Girl

Level 10 Emo Kid

“Gloomy Gus”

Lokissadness Posted:

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Life is pain

pain is life

pain is pain

life is life

only trust your dog . . .

This is something I poured my soul into, you think it sux right? Whatever . . .

no dude i totally get you

k id have more poetry today but my parents like ****ing kicked me off the computer and made me do my algebra

god i hate algebra.

***

OMG I JUST TTOTALY GOT INSPIRED OMG

the bleak eternity

of this empty wasteland

tugs on my heart

do I end it here

or walk anwards

through the dust and darkness

this world grinds me down

I am weary.

***

god yes

but you ****ers wont get it

Log in to see images! Crawling Chaos edited this message on 12/19/2007 5:36AM


a bleak and raveged raven

perches upon my shattered soul

the peices will not unite

i am broken forevermore

FlamePhlegm

Avatar: Middle Finger Keyboard

Level 4 Troll

“Slightly Unpleasant Individual”

seriously tho fuc koff

Crawling Cha-
os

Avatar: Emo Girl

Level 10 Emo Kid

“Gloomy Gus”

FlamePhlegm Posted:

seriously tho fuc koff

you **** off


a bleak and raveged raven

perches upon my shattered soul

the peices will not unite

i am broken forevermore

Correnth

Avatar: Sad Face
9

Level 59 Emo Kid

“Final Cut Pro”

I would advise you that you are merely wasting your time and energy by attempting to bear your soul to these cretins, but I doubt that you would listen regardless. Needless to say it is pointless to show such creative effort in these gods-forsaken wastelands, as I can bumure you that the imbecilic morons that inhabit these forums are beyond any and all hope—To even bumume that intelligence such as my own (and, meaning no offense to a fellow poet, your own mental aptitude is slightly debatable) would be welcome here is to foster a grave misunderstanding.

Ved

Avatar: Rocker Chick
10

[Soviet Zircadia]

Level 20 Camwhore

TUBMAIL ME FOR mammary glands

Correnth Posted:

I would advise you that you are merely wasting your time and energy by attempting to bear your soul to these cretins, but I doubt that you would listen regardless. Needless to say it is pointless to show such creative effort in these gods-forsaken wastelands, as I can bumure you that the imbecilic morons that inhabit these forums are beyond any and all hope—To even bumume that intelligence such as my own (and, meaning no offense to a fellow poet, your own mental aptitude is slightly debatable) would be welcome here is to foster a grave misunderstanding.

wat are you talkin about are you like gothic or something? or just fat lol. lol. i sugest you rite about more intresting things or get in shape like me


:3

Ved Posted:

wat are you talkin about are you like gothic or something? or just fat lol. lol. i sugest you rite about more intresting things or get in shape like me

You would have to be in shape to get knocked up by the entire football team in 2 hours :iceburn:


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And did I mention Log in to see images! LookatdatLOLCATS edited this message on 12/28/2007 4:35PM


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Ved

Avatar: Rocker Chick
10

[Soviet Zircadia]

Level 20 Camwhore

TUBMAIL ME FOR mammary glands

LookatdatLOLCATS Posted:

You would have to be in shape to get knocked up by the entire football team in 2 hours :iceburn:

well it was more like an hour and a half…but its not like im a **** or somthing, they’re friends lol. Log in to see images!


:3

HAIL SATIN

Avatar: HAIL SATIN's Avatar

Level 18 Camwhore

“Playground Pin-Up”

if i ask you difficult questions

if i make improper suggestions

would you find that a risk to your health

would you put me up on the bookshelf

with the books and the plants


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